Two emerging screenwriters – Chas Fisher and Stuart Willis – try to work out what makes great screenplays work. Discovering what it takes by analysing what successful writers put on the page.
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episode 46: DZ-46: Structure & Point of View
What questions do you want your audience asking at any given time?
Waaaaaaaaaay back in DZ-05, Stu and Chas examined how shifting narrative point of view (i.e. what the audience knows in relation to the characters on screen) heightens emotions in any given scene. We've now taken that micro idea and applied it to the macro: how can deciding what the audience knows and when in relation to the characters organise your story? Are whole sequences or even acts driven by the audience following a character, feeling concerned about a character, empathising with a character or being absorbed in the irony of knowing more than all the characters interacting on screen.
To tackle this topic, Stu and Chas dive in to films that make very conscious structural choices in relation to narrative POV, namely: GET OUT, DUNKIRK and the underrated German film THE LIVES OF OTHERS (with honourable mentions to LA CONFIDENTIAL and MANCHESTER BY THE SEA).
Wait till the end to hear poor Stu's mind absolutely blown in relation to the Kuleshov effect.
As always: SPOILERS ABOUND
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EPISODE LINKS
- DRAFT ZERO Related Episodes
- DZ-05: Shifting audience point of view and heightened emotions
- DZ-10: Midpoint Reversals and The Ride
- DZ-21: Scene Transitions and the Hook
- INTRODUCTION
- LA Confidential [@ 6m 21s]
- Manchester by the Sea [@ 10m 57s]
- GET OUT written & directed by Jordan Peele [@ 19m 57s]
- Vimeo: Get Out - Alternate Ending
- Jordan Peele on the Nerdist Podcast and on The Movie Crypt podcast
- Jason Blum on the Nerdist Podcast
- Find it on Just Watch
- DUNKIRK written & directed by by Christopher Nolan [@ 50m 15s]
- Vox: The sound illusion that makes Dunkirk so intense
- Find it on Just Watch
- THE LIVES OF OTHERS written & directed by Florian Henckel von Donnersmark [@ 1hr 31m 00s]
- Find it on Just Watch
- WRAP UP [@ 2hr 11m 32s]
- The Kuleshov effect
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