Jeff Reads His Book

Once upon a time, Jeff wrote a book in one month. Now he plans to read it, chapter by chapter with commentary, for everyone to enjoy! He'll critique spelling and typos, identify gaping plot holes, and ridicule the awkward dialog he incorporated into this work of literature. Come along for the exciting journey into a fantasy world riddled with grammar errors!

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Offworlder Chapter 14


I diverge from the story repeatedly as I read Chapter 14 of Offworlder, a book I wrote in a month.  Shirtless Henry gets woken up to do battle with raiders.  Janey sleeps through a five hour carriage ride.  A supposedly vicious fighter starts weeping.  I lament the vague descriptions of magic in this book and wonder if lamb is a socially acceptable meat.  Discussion questions wrap up a drinking-break-filled episode!


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 October 16, 2019  52m