Jeff Reads His Book

Once upon a time, Jeff wrote a book in one month. Now he plans to read it, chapter by chapter with commentary, for everyone to enjoy! He'll critique spelling and typos, identify gaping plot holes, and ridicule the awkward dialog he incorporated into this work of literature. Come along for the exciting journey into a fantasy world riddled with grammar errors!

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Offworlder Chapter 18


I stumble through chapter 18 of Offworlder, a book I wrote in a month.  Our heroes attend yet another staff meeting and once again fail to use any magic.  Henry receives some bad news that is relatively ambiguous to the reader.  Margaux returns to her outdoor desk for lunch.  I wonder if perhaps I'm being too explicitly negative about the quality of this book.  Discussion questions close out our fortieth episode!


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 November 13, 2019  49m