Jeff Reads His Book

Once upon a time, Jeff wrote a book in one month. Now he plans to read it, chapter by chapter with commentary, for everyone to enjoy! He'll critique spelling and typos, identify gaping plot holes, and ridicule the awkward dialog he incorporated into this work of literature. Come along for the exciting journey into a fantasy world riddled with grammar errors!

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Homecoming Chapter 37


I navigate, like a maze of poorly described hallways, chapter 37 of Homecoming, a book I wrote in a month.  Margaux runs towards danger despite her father's condescending tone.  Our heroes kiss far too long as Margaux pushes Henry up against a wall even though her father and a complete stranger are watching this scene play out, probably looking away embarassed.  There are guards and enemies, but they turn out to be useless filler in this chapter.  I record and edit on time, but forget to release this episode until this week!  Discussion questions end an exciting installment!


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 October 12, 2020  25m